Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Acrostic Poem


ELECTRICITY
Lights
Energy
Costing lots of money
Turn switches off
Remember
In your home
Conserve electricity
It will save you money
Try not to waste it
You need to be wise

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4 comments:

  1. Jo FothergillJune 9, 2009 at 8:06 PM

    I really like your acrostic poem. I've been encouraing my Y3 & Y4 students to write acrostic poems about Autumn. I'd like to share your acrostic with them at school tomorrow.

    Jo Fothergill
    Raumati Beach School
    http://room10rbs.edublogs.org

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  2. AnonymousJune 10, 2009 at 11:29 AM

    I think you have a really cool poem - Connor (8)

    I think your poem is awesome - Daniel (8)

    I think it's cool that you're 8 and have your own blog - Dylan (8)

    I think your poem is true - we need to do all those things - Eli (7)

    I think your poem is excellent - Drew (7)

    I think your poem has got lots of detail - Kelsey (7)

    I think your poem has got lots of interesting words - Jeffrey (7)

    I like the fact that you used sentences and not just single words - Ryan (8)

    I think it's way too cool that you're 8 and doing this kind of acrostic poem - Hannah T (7)

    I like how you chose the word electricity - Libby (8)

    I wish I was as good as you in poetry writing - Hannah G (8)

    Your poem is excellent - Tiealee (7)

    I like the poem - Jack (9)

    I like your idea about power - Alex (8)

    It was a long poem - well done - Ryder (7)

    I like your acrostic poem - Jessica (7)

    I think we should write a poem like yours - Ashleigh - (7)

    I like your poem because you use interesting words - Tina (8)

    This is the best poem I've read - James (8)

    I think your poem is amazing - Kate (7)

    Now that's what I call an acrostic poem - Ben (8)

    Room 10 - Raumati Beach School
    http://room10rbs.edublogs.org

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  3. My Web WorldMay 4, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    Thanks for all your comments guys/grils/men/women

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  4. AnonymousMay 28, 2011 at 2:19 PM

    i think your poem is awsome. it should teach us all a lesson :)

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